After dumping a pretty raw first draft online yesterday, to make the jam deadline, I have now gone through the document. The formatting now looks much nicer, there are several new images throughout, and some changed and added text. There's still a lot of revision ahead, but it should be much more readable now.
Any feedback is welcome!
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